A change in plan..

After having our final animatic reviewed our teacher then told us that what we was trying to do was to complicated, too many locations in such a short space of time and that we needed to make it more simple for our audience to understand. So as a group we decided to re-think the story line and how we could improve it. We still wanted to keep the same idea about people being kidnapped by a mad man but perhaps change the characters. To get some inspiration we watched a few openings, one that we really thought was effective was 'Seven' by M.Night.Shyamalan. We liked how simple yet effective the opening was, you just see a man lieing in bed with a clock ticking away creating a lot of suspence and mystery to the opening.